Hey Jayson - just a couple of quick thoughts ...
First, this image is very pleasing in several respects. I like the lines and the low angle, and the sky came out nicely exposed. The issue in my mind comes in more with the foreground, which appears to be underexposed on my monitor.
I'm not sure about the manual settings on your camera. I looked it up briefly but couldn't really tell what all it had as far as manual settings are concerned (so ignore any of this that doesn't apply to your particular camera). For HDR to work, you have to have a camera that offers different levels of exposure or a means of adjusting the shutter speed. You should also be able to shoot in RAW format to allow maximum control over how your image ultimately turns out. Then as you take the shots, you need a minimum of three exposures (though CS2 lets you get by with two, three is better). You need one exposure at or near the recommended exposure for that scene ... then you'll need one a full stop below and one a full stop above that. Better yet, do a range of 7 photos from near black (total underexposure) to near white (total overexposure), with additional shots at one stop intervals. I'd suggest using some of the workflow techniques suggested in this thread. The more you try it, the more proficient you'll become. So far the shots I have tried have been experimental only, and I haven't done a lot with it (so nothing fancy - like you see from ol' Mr. McGinnis). Just trying to get the feel of it. Once you let the program merge the RAW files, you'll have to mix the file down from 32 to a 16 bit RGB file ... and at that point you'll apply smooth S curves to the highlights and shadows to bring out the best in each (this is using CS2 ... I don't know how Photomatix works).
Anyway, those are just my suggestions. Thanks for posting ... Happy shooting! - - -
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